Friday 29 June 2018

WALHT write an explanation


Success Criteria
Self Assessment
I will have an introduction
(Title, hook, 1 sentence saying what the writing will be about)
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I will have an body of text
(look at my first picture, use my keywords to write 1-2 sentences explaining it)
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I will have an conclusion
(I will end with a personal statement or interesting fact)
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                   How a circuit works               
Would you like to know how a circuit works?.
you need electricity to use these things, lights,
computers, tvs, and many different things.  

Electrons don't do to much on their own these.
i am going to tell you how a circuit works.
you need batteries, lights, and wires.
The batteries have got the negative end and
the positive ends. The electrons come out of
the negative end and travel around to the
positive end. You can add switches.
You can turn it on and turn it off.  
It Makes a breaks in the circuit.

Would you like to make a circuit  

3 comments:

  1. hello jazi
    great job with our learning
    love from you bestest friend
    Dayna

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  2. hi my name is kingston

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    Replies
    1. Kingston you are meant to add more than that

      Delete

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